Loved it. I originally played through their "Now and Then" and accidentally stumbled across this. But this probably beats any other I've played. The plot and character development was absolutely amazing and the story was the best I've read. I'm just upset I accidentally overwrote my save so I couldn't go back and go through all the girls endings. My previous favourite (keyword previous) and a recommendation is Eternum. Pls reply with any other good ones, on itch or anything else
This game is really great. However, it needs a serious proof-read especially on the back 1/3 of the game. Lots of nonsensical text (mostly where a word is missing or the wrong word is used). Also note that Kara's story 9 shows the text to be Kaitlin.
Still playing the game currently going through the list to get all their final stories. But holy shit I am surprised at how emotional I am getting with each one I say goodbye to. Only sent off Mina, Saaya, Natalie and just now Kara but each time my heart breaks and my emotions just overwhelm me. Thank you for this game I am loving it and how attached I get to the characters.
A nice Quality of Life feature that would be great to have would be if there were a notification that pops up before sending someone off if they still have parts to play in other characters' stories.
i.e. "Are you sure you want to send them off? They still have a role to play in x's story." ------------ Another possible Quality of Life feature would be to give character stories dependencies on other stories in order to progress them.
i.e. Have Saaya's progress dependent on where you're at with Kaitlin; and/or Kara's progress dependent on Marisa's. ------------ Both suggestions are just so we don't accidentally miss out on interactions between the characters. ------------ Side Note: I try to keep everyone's Story numbers the same because, presumably, it'll have all of the character stories be at roughly the same place chronologically in the over-arching story. However, not everyone has the same amount of Story numbers, so trying to keep them all the same ends up having some people get sent off too early. So have to keep some characters hanging around just so they can join in on other stories. To combat that, maybe could add a Linear Mode that we can play where everything happens in the order it's "supposed" to and that way it'd be hard to miss any content.
First this is a Really awesome story for a visual novel
i read it completely there are some typos and little things
like in the last kara part she is named Kaitlin little things nothing really serious loved the store nonetheless only the graphics may need a little overhaul
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found a bug, Marisa day 14
Loved it. I originally played through their "Now and Then" and accidentally stumbled across this. But this probably beats any other I've played. The plot and character development was absolutely amazing and the story was the best I've read. I'm just upset I accidentally overwrote my save so I couldn't go back and go through all the girls endings. My previous favourite (keyword previous) and a recommendation is Eternum. Pls reply with any other good ones, on itch or anything else
This game is really great. However, it needs a serious proof-read especially on the back 1/3 of the game. Lots of nonsensical text (mostly where a word is missing or the wrong word is used). Also note that Kara's story 9 shows the text to be Kaitlin.
Still playing the game currently going through the list to get all their final stories.
But holy shit I am surprised at how emotional I am getting with each one I say goodbye to.
Only sent off Mina, Saaya, Natalie and just now Kara but each time my heart breaks and my emotions just overwhelm me.
Thank you for this game I am loving it and how attached I get to the characters.
is it finished and have ending?
in kara's 9th story I didn't get a choice and was forced to miss the sex scene
A nice Quality of Life feature that would be great to have would be if there were a notification that pops up before sending someone off if they still have parts to play in other characters' stories.
i.e. "Are you sure you want to send them off? They still have a role to play in x's story."
------------
Another possible Quality of Life feature would be to give character stories dependencies on other stories in order to progress them.
i.e. Have Saaya's progress dependent on where you're at with Kaitlin; and/or Kara's progress dependent on Marisa's.
------------
Both suggestions are just so we don't accidentally miss out on interactions between the characters.
------------
Side Note: I try to keep everyone's Story numbers the same because, presumably, it'll have all of the character stories be at roughly the same place chronologically in the over-arching story.
However, not everyone has the same amount of Story numbers, so trying to keep them all the same ends up having some people get sent off too early. So have to keep some characters hanging around just so they can join in on other stories.
To combat that, maybe could add a Linear Mode that we can play where everything happens in the order it's "supposed" to and that way it'd be hard to miss any content.
First this is a Really awesome story for a visual novel
i read it completely there are some typos and little things
like in the last kara part she is named Kaitlin little things nothing really serious loved the store nonetheless only the graphics may need a little overhaul
Yea I noticed that bug too.